There once was a curious Earthling on planet Earth that wanted to know everything, every where. Although she was a notmal grade twelve student that went to school she was the next Albert Einstein. So one day she decided to send the Aliens that she still believed that existed a message. People though that she has just gone crazy and she was kicked out of school. But she still had a strong heart and believed. Dear Aliens, 14/09/1970
I am a little Earthling form the planet Earth. I am writing to you because I still believe that you exist. Most people on my planet think that you are some crazy joke. I don't think that though. I would really like to learn your ways and visit you in outer space where everything still remains a mystery. I have always wondered how it would be to live on Mars and all those other planets that you have traveled to. This is just because of curiosity, but I would really like to know what you eat. I just like to try new things. Another thing that I want to know is what you do during the day. Do you do complicated work like us Earthlings or just kill other aliens and people for life and eat their brains for dinner. OK, that was too in depth. I would really like to meet you in person and see how you are like. I don't have very many friends so I'm depending on you. As you can probably see, I am a really curious Earthling. If you understood anything I please write back.
Sincerely,
Earthling from Earth
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1 comments:
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I like your ideas here, Stefanie. But, you have the tendency to jump around a lot from idea to idea. In your next entry, ensure that each sentence FLOWS to the next.
Also, I found the following grammar issues:
- missing QUESTION MARKS (?) at the end of question sentences.
- planet should be capitalized as it's referring to a specific planet (Planet Earth)
- You wrote 'though' , but meant to write 'thought'
Keep it up!
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