Blog Entry #1

There once was a dog named Tyson that lived in the city with his owner Fred. Five years ago Fred was only a twelve year old boy and Tyson was his first dog that he had ever had. They played, they laughed and ran with joy in every park that they went to. Tyson felt like he had a true friend. But later on, as the time went by, Tyson was slowly beginning to be left with no care. He felt betrayed. Tyson no longer had the awareness that he had a trustworthy friend anymore. What will Tyson do?

Dear Fred,

Hello, I'm your brilliant dog Tyson. You might be wondering how I wrote this letter, so I'm just going to confess to you. You see, while you were lazing around, I got myself an English dog tutor and learned how to read and write. I was so irked by your actions that I wanted to start something else in my life. Something new and exciting. So I fulfilled my dream. My tutor has not only been teaching me how to read and write, but she has been my physician as well. I have gotten more fit, but she hasn't done such a good job, so that is why I need your help. Please read the rest of my letter. I desperately need help!

I am so bored! Is my point as clear as mud? Thought so. I would really appreciate it of you would not be a lazy bum and sleep on the couch all day, but instead take me out on daily walks. You see there comes a time in a dogs existence when they have to meet another dog and start a new life with them. I would really like you to take me out on walks to get me ready for that dog who is meant to be. I am in horrible shape, I have a terrible diet, and I want to get some attention from you to show me that you care about me. I have met someone already but she doesn't seem to notice me. I would really like to see you trying to do these things for me. Oh and by the way I desperately need a bath and a new haircut.

I am warning you, if I don't see you trying I am going t reveal all your personal secrets to the world and you will be the hated one. I am watching your every move.

Your suspicious dog,
Tyson

I hope that you enjoyed this entry!
Your wonderful friend,
Candy Cane :D










1 comments:

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Stefanie,
A wonderfully creative entry! I really loved how you took on the personality of Tyson. I also loved seeing some new vocabulary (i.e. "irked"). Maybe add a graphic/image here.
P.S. I love the look of your blog!

 

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