Blog Entry #2

Dear Toronto,

Will you be friends with me? I am in desperate need of friends. I have been wishing for this opportunity to come my whole life. Hamilton said no because he thought that I was just going to use him to make me look good, and Burlington just said no because she didn't like my attitude. I also asked all of the other cities but yet again they, said "NO!!!". Do you even know how it feel to be with no friends, no shoulder to lean on, nobody to accompany you when you're in trouble and in sorrow pain. Doesn't anyone feel pitiful to see me with no friends? It is a little bit strange to me to get such negative feedback, what have I done to get my neighbors angry and make them not want to be my friends anymore. I am actually a better person than they think. You are the only person that I haven't asked. Please be my friend. This is my chance for you to hear me.

Well, you see, to be honest I've actually had an insane crush on you since the day I first saw you on that red carpet, walking so perfectly toward one of your fans, I madly fell in love. From that day forward, I couldn't get your perfect and flawless face out of my head. I would have endless dreams about us being together. But deep down inside I knew that day would never come. You are my shining, bright star, my excellent role model, and the love of my life. I know that you would never even want to speak to a person like me because I'm not as wealthy as a man such as yourself, but there are more things in life than being a filthy, rich person. Money isn't everything. I hope that you will realize that too. I don't want to make you nervous in front of all your celebrity friends by writing this to you, but this is what I have to say from what I have seen. All I'm asking is the chance for us to be friends.



Your pleading neighbor,

Oakville

P.S. I hope that you know that I am your suburban buddy.

Hope you had fun reading this friendly yet romantic blog!!
By the way this reminds me of the song 'Take a Chance on Me" by ABBA
(8)If you change your mind, I'm the first in line. Honey I'm still free, Take a chance on me.(8)
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Sincerely,
Candy Cane :D




1 comments:

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Stefanie,

A very creative entry! I enjoyed reading your love letter to Toronto. Be sure to watch out for sentence structure/grammar issues. Big improvement from the beginning of the year!

 

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